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Mr Initial Man



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PostPosted: Mon Oct 30, 2006 11:23 pm    Post subject: A website I did for a comic Reply with quote

Coach Random Comic

Let me know what you think!
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noobla!



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PostPosted: Tue Oct 31, 2006 5:15 pm    Post subject: Re: A website I did for a comic Reply with quote

Hey Mr.,

first of all i have to say: good-looking and valid code! But, uhm, where is the design? I just can see some oversized headlines and black-on-grey text. Create a design looking like a comic. The topic allows you to be creative. Why are you using a lazy grey site?
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Mr Initial Man



Joined: 30 Oct 2006
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PostPosted: Tue Oct 31, 2006 5:56 pm    Post subject: Re: A website I did for a comic Reply with quote

A lot of comic sites I've gone to looked really cluttered, and I found that a bit of a distraction. I also wasn't sure what to do for graphics because I never did the comics themselves.

I take it I went a bit far with "uncluttered design".
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noobla!



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PostPosted: Wed Nov 01, 2006 11:07 am    Post subject: Re: A website I did for a comic Reply with quote

A cluttered design don't have to be distracted. A structured design should be tasty anyway. Find a way between being distracted and structured. Let the site looks nice and structured by using a clear grid, a white background and comic-styled borders. Your current result is undesigned at all! By the way: What's your resolution you are using?

Best regards from the old good rainy germany.
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Mr Initial Man



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PostPosted: Wed Nov 01, 2006 9:28 pm    Post subject: Re: A website I did for a comic Reply with quote

What do you mean by "Undesigned"? I thought I had a good, clean layout for my website.
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