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DonTony
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 Posted: Tue Apr 17, 2007 9:10 pm Post subject: some of my work |
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hey everybody!
I do use c4d now and then, and im just a newb in it, i've just a few hours spend on it, but anyway here are some of my results:
My Watch
my rate: [5/10]
Wheel
my rate: [8/10]
Just Some Artistic Mess
my rate: [5,5/10]
iPOD
my rate: [7/10]
so what do you guys think? |
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ramnosity
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| Posted: Wed Apr 18, 2007 2:04 am Post subject: Re: some of my work |
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| Looks O.k. One big thing you need to do is Anti-aliasing your stuff. I makes the edges smoother and makes it look alot better. I don't know how to use it in C4D. Another thing is on your iPod it's a little to "metal". Try turning the brushed metal look down a little. |
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thehen
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| Posted: Wed Apr 18, 2007 9:55 am Post subject: Re: some of my work |
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| I think you need to look at sorting out your lighting too. Try experimenting with more lights. Try a dome-lighting setup. |
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DonTony
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| Posted: Thu Apr 19, 2007 8:19 pm Post subject: Re: some of my work |
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yeah this were'nt pics for the pics  just for the models 
but yeah,, maybe it's nicer if I try some other lightning technigues |
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DonTony
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ElectrifieD
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| Posted: Mon May 28, 2007 11:38 pm Post subject: Re: some of my work |
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Very well done 
It looks like the inner part of the rim is tilted alittle but maybe the reflections deceive me
But i'm not really sure about the disc 
It's very nice though GJ and i like the watch as well  |
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