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schmuck86
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 Posted: Tue Aug 21, 2007 6:52 am Post subject: First Line Art Attempt |
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This is my first attempt at doing some line art. I know i definitely need to work on my shadows, but some other criticisms would be appreciated. I know the image is a little choppy, but click on the image and you'll see a higher res version. |
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kilz2latex
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| Posted: Tue Aug 21, 2007 7:23 pm Post subject: Re: First Line Art Attempt |
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| i think the only thing that needs to be worked on in this one is the chin line. |
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Fizzz
Joined: 07 Dec 2007
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Location: Brighton, UK
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| Posted: Fri Dec 07, 2007 11:01 am Post subject: Re: First Line Art Attempt |
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| Really nice! i like the use of shadow and contrast |
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dflynn
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| Posted: Sat Dec 08, 2007 7:15 am Post subject: Re: First Line Art Attempt |
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i would suggest making the chinline bolder and solid and blacking out the hair only because the back parto f the hair begins to look likes a tumor after a while
good work though,
very nice |
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peejah
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| Posted: Fri Jan 18, 2008 4:41 am Post subject: Re: First Line Art Attempt |
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i think chin line is fine  I'd work on the background...no hard lines and a subject blends right in  |
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