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redruster



Joined: 12 May 2008
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PostPosted: Wed May 14, 2008 1:05 am    Post subject: My work (I am a totall newb at it) Reply with quote

i just wanted to show off some of my work i would really apreciate feedback since i know that these are pretty bad, just anything that could help me. I also need some help on how u guys blends pics into your workks.

well here they are (i used the word bountykla cause its my screen name on another forum and i dont really like redruster, it doesnt flow lol)


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again i welcome cunstructive critizeism and would really like some feedback[/list]
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FR4NT1C



Joined: 17 May 2008
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PostPosted: Sat May 17, 2008 11:01 pm    Post subject: Re: My work (I am a totall newb at it) Reply with quote

Use a smaller canvas size, i use 400 x 130 pixels try to stay away from soo many brushes, go to www.deviantart.com for some sick tutorials

otherwise goodjob Very Happy
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rachjm
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Joined: 26 Mar 2008
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PostPosted: Mon May 19, 2008 2:09 am    Post subject: Re: My work (I am a totall newb at it) Reply with quote

A bit busy - less is more. Also agree about the brushes - be careful how much you use them. Nice attempts for a newbie, tho - keep it up Smile
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Isick
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Joined: 27 May 2007
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PostPosted: Mon May 19, 2008 2:25 pm    Post subject: Re: My work (I am a totall newb at it) Reply with quote

the number one rule in sig making (granted I don't hold sig making in the highest regard, but it's a good place to learn basic skills) is to match the color of the render (the main object) with the the overall color of the background. If your render is green you want your background to be green ish, if your render is grey, you want your background desaturated, if your render is dark then you want your background to be darker, you get the idea. Your renders are different from their backgrounds in both color and brightness so it appears extremely contrasty to the viewer creating a sense of stress. Since stress is not what you were going for (I assume) you are going to want to re color.
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