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rigelian

Joined: 09 May 2008 Posts: 7
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Posted: Fri May 09, 2008 2:44 am Post subject: ? |
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what does this look like? its going to be yet another one of my stencils that I paint on shirts when its done. the problem is I'm not shure if it looks like it should. I want to know what it looks like to people who don't alredy know what it is.
what do you think it is? |
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Isick 250+ Club

Joined: 27 May 2007 Posts: 314 Location: Chicago
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Posted: Fri May 09, 2008 4:53 am Post subject: Re: ? |
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Scope.
Pretty obvious in my book, but I guess I could understand how someone not familiar with the object would be confused. |
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Raven12388 250+ Club
Joined: 06 Apr 2008 Posts: 335 Location: Liverpool, England
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Posted: Fri May 09, 2008 11:58 am Post subject: Re: ? |
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| ya looks like a gun scope but even if it was a photograph of a scope if someone didnt know what it was they would be confused anyone that knows what a scope is will know what that is |
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rachjm 250+ Club

Joined: 26 Mar 2008 Posts: 353 Location: New Zealand
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Posted: Sat May 10, 2008 12:26 pm Post subject: Re: ? |
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Before I scrolled down I would have guessed at some kind of telescopic lens. Is that close enough?
Btw, it may just be my eyes being funny or my monitor resolution being poor, but it looks to me like the horizontal and vertical cross-hairs aren't at right angles. Perspective-wise, the whole things just looks a little off. Does anyone agree with me on this? |
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Raven12388 250+ Club
Joined: 06 Apr 2008 Posts: 335 Location: Liverpool, England
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Posted: Sat May 10, 2008 12:30 pm Post subject: Re: ? |
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a telescopic lens is close enough hehe
yes your right on the cross-hairs rach |
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rigelian

Joined: 09 May 2008 Posts: 7
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Posted: Sun May 11, 2008 4:47 am Post subject: Re: ? |
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thanks evreone for your help
this is what I got so far
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the problem is, I think the saying could use some improvement, or maybe it can stay the same, I'm not shure. what do you think? |
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Raven12388 250+ Club
Joined: 06 Apr 2008 Posts: 335 Location: Liverpool, England
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Posted: Sun May 11, 2008 9:30 am Post subject: Re: ? |
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ok umm you sending a photoshopped threat to someone lol
i would change
i can`t say i`ll miss you
to
i will not miss
but thats up to you to deside |
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rachjm 250+ Club

Joined: 26 Mar 2008 Posts: 353 Location: New Zealand
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Posted: Sun May 11, 2008 11:40 am Post subject: Re: ? |
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Hehe - corny but great - I have a mate who says stuff like that all the time...
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i would change
i can`t say i`ll miss you
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i will not miss
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If you change that then it loses all of its comedic impact because it isn't a pun anymore. ("I will not miss" can't be used to describe a lack of sadness over a person leaving, whereas "I can't say I'll miss you" has that double meaning). I think the original wording is good, rigelian.
I still think you need to fix your perspective, though, to make it look professional... |
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flabbyrabbit 250+ Club

Joined: 25 Jan 2007 Posts: 496 Location: UK
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Posted: Sun May 11, 2008 3:19 pm Post subject: Re: ? |
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What about "I will not miss you"?
Flabby Rabbit |
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rachjm 250+ Club

Joined: 26 Mar 2008 Posts: 353 Location: New Zealand
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Posted: Sun May 11, 2008 9:28 pm Post subject: Re: ? |
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| flabbyrabbit wrote: |
What about "I will not miss you"?
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My vote's with this one - it's gonna b quicker to read on a t-shirt, and it's still funny  |
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rigelian

Joined: 09 May 2008 Posts: 7
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Posted: Sun May 11, 2008 9:30 pm Post subject: Re: ? |
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no, this is not to annyone, its ment to be a joke. chances are I'm not going to shoot annyone. another idea that I had was that to make a sticker for a store window that would say:
"warning: shop protected by .303
you may get out, but you won't get far"
something like that |
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rigelian

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Posted: Sun May 11, 2008 10:12 pm Post subject: Re: ? |
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here is the newest things
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this one I might print out on sticker sheets when done
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rachjm 250+ Club

Joined: 26 Mar 2008 Posts: 353 Location: New Zealand
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Posted: Sun May 11, 2008 10:14 pm Post subject: Re: ? |
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| Design is good - it looks so 'furry' tho. Can't u use vectors to get it sharp? |
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