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Postby tombothetominator on Fri May 18, 2007 3:45 pm

Did this while waiting for parts to arrive at work. I need to tweak the b/w image to reduce noise and make it fit a little better, but figured i would post it up and see what kind of c&cs you guys had.

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Postby Q21 on Fri May 18, 2007 5:07 pm

Its personally not my cup of tea. And the whole text thing doesnt seem to flow. And why the ¿Laptop? in the bottom riht corner lol?

Overall its nice...but not really lol
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Postby tombothetominator on Fri May 18, 2007 5:16 pm

Q21 wrote:Its personally not my cup of tea. And the whole text thing doesnt seem to flow. And why the ¿Laptop? in the bottom riht corner lol?

Overall its nice...but not really lol


Appreciate the crits. How would you recommend making the text flow better? And it isn't a laptop in the corner, it is the reflecting mirror from inside of the camera (take the lense off, and that is what you see inside).
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Postby ElectrifieD on Fri May 18, 2007 8:00 pm

I can't really understand it but it seems like a nice idea
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Postby Q21 on Fri May 18, 2007 10:21 pm

For the text i would just make it less colorful, and maybe more bold lol. But like i had said not my cup of tea so i aint really got much ideas to throw out lol.

I still dont get camera part though lol..keep in mind im not too bright haha.
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Postby Excruciating on Sat May 19, 2007 1:29 am

NOOOO! Keep the text! That's the best part!
And I dig those lines flowing around.
All you need to add is a little bit of flair to the whole thing.. perhaps a bit of simplicity / there are too many things going on.
Make sure of what you want before you make anything.
Visualize that goal, think it over again and improve it, so you won't even recognise what you started off with.
That's the best way to create new great things :D
weeeee!
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Postby c_dan on Sun May 20, 2007 12:56 am

what exactly can't you understand about the camera? it's about the creativity of a photographer.. there are a lot of colors, cuz the process involves advanced knowledge of dealing with colors, and shades etc. The fading camera is probably the photographer's equipment. Promote what you use.
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