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Postby ddoonie on Fri Nov 16, 2007 8:11 am

Hello,

I recently embarked on creating a new website for my dad, and figured i would ask you guys for your feedback... it is not live yet, but it is all online, if that makes sense.

www.srcpro.com/2.html

if you go to srcpro.com you'll see the original page i'm trying to get rid of!

all the links should work, aside from the home link as it is not 'live' yet.

Ignore the content and/or spelling errors etc... mainly layout and any general feed back would be much appreciated! Thanks!!

Darryl
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Postby fafi on Fri Nov 16, 2007 12:31 pm

Hi,
I'm new here and just checked out your website.
I think you've done a great job especially being your first site. Your main menu's clear and i like your main rollovers. The layout works well with the exception of your intro page. The middle column is very congested, there's little space to rest the eye. Perhaps adopt the text spacing in your candidates or client's page.
I hope it's been of some help
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Postby tone on Tue Dec 04, 2007 1:16 pm

Your dad is very lucky, but I think the web is too gloomy, which make people feel not good.
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Postby ddoonie on Wed Dec 12, 2007 4:47 am

Thank you both for your comments... fafi, i made a few adjustments, probably not as much as you'd like hehe, but still i did heed your words.

Tone, what would you suggest to make it 'less' gloomy?

Thanks again for the comments!!

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Postby dflynn on Wed Dec 12, 2007 6:13 am

I think you did a great job for your first time.

A few things

To me being on that feel like I'm in a bank

I think by gloomy tone is saying that the colours are very monotone and dull which takes away the "excitement" factor.
It feels very suit and tie
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Postby ddoonie on Wed Dec 12, 2007 4:42 pm

Well it may be a good thing that it feels suit and tie... my father's clients are usually senior levels, and i believe thats the kind of environment he'd prefer. I feel what you are saying, to me its missing something, but can't put my finger on it!

Thanks again!
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Postby ddoonie on Sun Dec 16, 2007 5:56 am

Recently updated again... you can view the site at the main page now.. www.srcpro.com
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Postby dazz_club on Sat Mar 08, 2008 8:50 pm

Hey dude, just a few questions.

On the home page why are the paragraphs images rather than text??

Also the containers that the paragraph are in, mess with my eyes, they would look alot better if they where all aligned the same.

Try and put a border around the images on the left hand side and create some space between the edge the side and the images.

Oh and the tag, "Enjoy a lasting...." is difficult to read.

kind regards
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