look at my site

Johnathan · Posted: Wed Aug 08, 2007 7:01 am Post subject: look at my site

ok Finally my sites are nearly finished and i would you to have a look at them please and leave comments.

www.virtualairbelfast.co.uk
http://northern-ireland-ga.virtualairbelfast.co.uk
http://atc.virtualairbelfast.co.uk

ok the Northern Ireland GA and the VAB ATC still hav a bit of work to be dont to them and the main one i think i need to only change a few things but you guys please temm me what you think.

Thanks
Johnathan

ramnosity · Posted: Thu Aug 16, 2007 3:05 am Post subject: Re: look at my site

Well on the first and the last one the banner doesn't really look that good. You can see where it fades out but it doesn't fully fade and it just cuts out. You can see where the image stops. Also the green bar under it is the same and it really has no point being there.

vickymesh · Joined: 07 Sep 2007 Posts: 4

I like the fact that it is certainly different and unique. However, clicking on the links, some of them don’t work. Cool website. But still incorporating the services of any web design company might be more useful ( personal experience). I have a widescreen monitor so it looks kinda skinny. incorporate that css tip page into your site, and show off the technique.

Tomi · 500+ Club Joined: 26 Jun 2006 Posts: 818

Im sorry but i can't find anything right with it. For a start it looks amature, badly designed and unthourght out. Chavs in my IT class who sit playing games on miniclip all day have produced things better than this.

I suggest you sit down with a pen and paper. Think up a nice unique design, good spacing well layed out. Open a graphics package such as photoshop or fireworks. Develop the drawings into a CG design and slice it. Hire a coder to professionaly code the website and add your content to fit the style of the site.

Im sorry, however you asked for my opinion and there it is, constructive and informative.

dazz_club · Posted: Wed Oct 03, 2007 1:09 am Post subject: Re: look at my site

Hi there I agree with Tomi, i suggest you look at sites you like, that interest you and see why it works and possibly why you may want to incooperate into your design.

Dont touch any design package yet, create your vision on paper.

Check out sites like http://www.thefwa.com , the sites are really good, (really, really good). Try to get some ideas. Yes, they are in flash, but they are all very stylish and unique.

Look forward to the updated version

Torik · Joined: 28 Sep 2007 Posts: 2

I went to take a peek and here is what I've gathered

On the 1st Site the Banner is cut off very abruptly... which is quite aesthitically unpleasing. And the buttons on the navbar are rather visually unpleasing as well, but the layout is simple and effective. All in all good job, but just work on the visual aspect.

Well I just looked at both the other sites, and I have the same thing to say for all three. Just work on the Visuals and the site will be alot better.