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Please Critique My First Website

Postby tylorkolbeck on Fri Apr 27, 2007 3:36 am

Could you guys please KINDLY lol critque my first e-commerce site that I have ever done.

Thanks a million :)

O yeah almost forgot... scentsandsoftness.com lol
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Postby Excruciating on Fri Apr 27, 2007 5:48 am

It's not bad for a first try, though the first thing I noticed was the header was not directly about the body of the website.
And I think you should try moving the nav-bar the header and the body a bit closer to eachother.
I've got one question for my own sake, was does "LLC" mean in the logo name?
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Postby tylorkolbeck on Sat Apr 28, 2007 4:03 am

It stands for Limited Liability Company. It is a license for a comapny.


And I dont get what you are saying here?

"though the first thing I noticed was the header was not directly about the body of the website. "


Best Regards,
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Postby Ainz on Wed May 02, 2007 3:40 am

I like the colors, The only thing i can suggest right off the top would be to make the links on the left smaller....the boxes are way too big for the words....i dont like how I have to scroll so far down to the page to see a list of your products.

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Postby ReFredzRate on Thu May 03, 2007 11:17 am

The colors are good. But besides that there are a few mistakes you made while designing.

The width of the header should match the width of the lower 'frames' of the website. At this moment it's not wide enough.

Try to stylize the tables a bit by using CSS. You can set the width of the border to 1px, which makes the site look a bit smoother.

The light brown part below the main navigation menu doesn't show correctly. On the left side, around the vertical center of the bar, I see spot that shows the background color. Besides that, I'm not sure what the bar does, so you should get rid of it, or make it a functional bar.

Hope you can use the tips :)
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Postby dazz_club on Wed May 09, 2007 9:52 am

first off, you need to align the header, left nav and main body so there seems to some sort of shape to it.

other than that give yourself a pat on the back, you will soon learn from this.
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