Focus Logo

[Shoppintrolley]

This is a logo I designed for a friends group. They are called focus and so the priniciple behind hiding some of the name is that you had to do just that, although still make the name readable. C+C encouraged please.

[ElectrifieD]

I like it very much.Maybe it could use a frame or something like that i'm not sure.But it's great

[Tomi]

Nice but there is to much going on. Its like WHAAA!

I have to look at it for a lil while to figure out whats happening which shouldnt be the case for a logo, it should grab your attention and make you go WOOW!!111

[ElectrifieD]

I think it's just the opposite.The logo should make you stare at it.Only then it will get your attention.Think about it i f you go WOOW , thats it you'll just move on.That's my oppinion,i don't oblige anyone with it

[GeeOwedee]

Nice is that your finshed work.? our are you still working on it.?

[tombothetominator]

I would remove the eye, and leave the DJ for the background. The eye just distracts from the rest of the image (and it took a while to even realize that it was supposed to be an eye). Other than that I like it.

[jkersh]

I would remove the eye, and leave the DJ for the background. The eye just distracts from the rest of the image (and it took a while to even realize that it was supposed to be an eye). Other than that I like it.

+1
other than that it is good

[Q21]

That actually really looks nice...except im pretty dumb so it took me a few min to decifer the whole thing lol

[Shoppintrolley]

Thanks for the feedback. I am reconsidering the whole eye thing. I think maybe it is too much. Or maybe make a simpler eye?

[tombothetominator]

Thanks for the feedback. I am reconsidering the whole eye thing. I think maybe it is too much. Or maybe make a simpler eye?

Personally i would leave the eye out all together.