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 Post subject: my very first site
PostPosted: Fri Apr 20, 2007 4:54 am 
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this is my very first site i would like to know what you people here think of it



the to my site's home page is below
http://www.freewebs.com/jamesyr11/index.html


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PostPosted: Fri Apr 20, 2007 2:32 pm 
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I'll give you my opinion in a few paragraphs below.

It is far too dark. Your page is entirely black with a little white text on it. The header image doesn't brighten up the view either. You could try to use a darker grey as a background color.

In my opinion you should use a different font. At the moment you are using a paper font. Meaning: You're using a font that is used for newspapers, books et cetera. If you use a screen font (Verdana or Tahoma for instance) you will notice that the readability of the text will increase.

People are too left-oriented at the moment. Loads and loads of webdesigners and developers have come up with Web 2.0 and other theories trying to break those habits and make people more center-oriented again. Try for yourself. Do something entirely else than surf the web and start surfing the web again at a sudden. First thing to notice is the left side of the screen...
In my opinion, follow their lead and center the website.

If you use a darker shade of grey for the background, with a black block in the center of the page, with white text on it, the website will stand out a lot better. Try around with Photoshop a bit, create a workspace of 1024x768 and have a try with the colors a bit. Might give you some very interesting and catching results.

Last thing, but actually first thing to notice when opening your website, is that the image loads slow... slow.... slow.... (Ah, it's there ;) ) The image has been on my screen for about a minute, and now, finally, it actually really starts to rain. The image is great, I just love it, don't get me wrong. It just loads too slow. It's over 2Mb's in size, which is T-O-O much for an image.

Hope you can use my advice :)

PS: Welcome to devppl!


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PostPosted: Sat Apr 21, 2007 12:44 pm 
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:arrow: thanks for your reply
i know the banner is quite big i am working on down sizing it at the moment
i will use your advice

thanks :D

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PostPosted: Sat Apr 21, 2007 4:28 pm 
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Yeah, looks cool. But your banner does take way to long to even load up. I was on the forum page but the time I actually saw the banner pop up for the first time. May want to work on that.

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PostPosted: Sun Apr 22, 2007 1:54 am 
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:arrow: thanks for your reply
i know the banner is quite big i am working on down sizing it at the moment
i will use your advice

thanks :)

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shit!!! dat rain thign is amazing how did you get dat? any tutorials anywhere?

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 Post subject: umm...
PostPosted: Sun Jul 08, 2007 5:37 am 
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well please dont go to that link please go to http://www.rain-vfx.co.nr

we are currently offline for now next month we will be back on and back to owl former glory

the link that u have vistited was a school project with i got a A+ for.....

the banner with the rain effect in photoshop

if u want a tutorial please click on this link its not my site but it will do for now

http://www.entheosweb.com/photoshop/rain_effect.asp

well have fun

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