First Line Art Attempt

[schmuck86]

This is my first attempt at doing some line art. I know i definitely need to work on my shadows, but some other criticisms would be appreciated. I know the image is a little choppy, but click on the image and you'll see a higher res version.

[kilz2latex]

i think the only thing that needs to be worked on in this one is the chin line.

[Fizzz]

Really nice! i like the use of shadow and contrast

[dflynn]

i would suggest making the chinline bolder and solid and blacking out the hair only because the back parto f the hair begins to look likes a tumor after a while
good work though,
very nice

[peejah]

i think chin line is fine I'd work on the background...no hard lines and a subject blends right in