some of my work

hey everybody!

I do use c4d now and then, and im just a newb in it, i've just a few hours spend on it, but anyway here are some of my results:


My Watch
my rate: [5/10]

Wheel
my rate: [8/10]

Just Some Artistic Mess
my rate: [5,5/10]

iPOD
my rate: [7/10]


so what do you guys think?

Looks O.k. One big thing you need to do is Anti-aliasing your stuff. I makes the edges smoother and makes it look alot better. I don't know how to use it in C4D. Another thing is on your iPod it's a little to "metal". Try turning the brushed metal look down a little.

I think you need to look at sorting out your lighting too. Try experimenting with more lights. Try a dome-lighting setup.

yeah this were'nt pics for the pics just for the models

but yeah,, maybe it's nicer if I try some other lightning technigues

i changed some things on the wheel

http://www.dontony.deviantart.com
check the wheel model

Very well done
It looks like the inner part of the rim is tilted alittle but maybe the reflections deceive me
But i'm not really sure about the disc
It's very nice though GJ and i like the watch as well

Good job. I like it. But to Just Some Artistic Mess i rate 7 %)