Logo and banner

[Raven12388]

Hi there made this for a friend of mine comments welcome

[Johnathan]

I don't really like the text. Seems a bit like not nice? I dunno lol. A tiny bit too tacky. But I love the cards.

[Raven12388]

Hi Johnathan

So you think the font is tacky thats easy changed but you like the rest of it thats cool i will mess around with the font today i used that font because it was ragged and old looking like the cards hehe

[igjoe]

I think the banner text needs to have a stronger (bolder?) presence. Feels like a lot of open space and little emphasis on the words in my opinion. Also, maybe add a little more space between the cards and the text on the banner. Great work though. I like the distressed effect on everything.

[Raven12388]

thanks joe im looking in to the text and will post a revised version

[Johnathan]

I'd say it;s more the styles rather than the actual font I think.

[Raven12388]

we talking all the text johnathan or just the banner ?? or the fact its just black on the logo??

[Johnathan]

All of it.